recently about 6 days ago i made a short little video film, called chase scene, i spent 3 days of filming and another 2 on editing, if you are interested in seeing the video here is a link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dVDxIbvjboQ
anyways we shared the video in class and people critiqued it and gave there opinions, they told me that the lack of color in a white tile area made no since to the story, i told them that the no color was on purpose, i said you don't need color to tell a good story, they also said the red title at the beginning was hard to read which i agreed to as well, i will change that next time, the finally said thither was no action in the story, that was the point of the video its supposed to be a slow chase scene, not a suspenseful one, if i wanted to do a suspense i would have done more stones and story to it, this was just a fun little video i made for class, and if you don't like it thats fine, i didn't do it to please people i did it to please me and to me this was a good video.